I think the photo on the left is really cool, the make-up really goes well with the model's blouse. Perhaps the hairpiece on the left is a bit too colorful, but it's not really bothering me. Now, the right photo... sorry, but the green pants totally don't work for me, they throw the entire photo off-balance regarding colors. Also, the pattern is something completely different than the pattern on the blouse. And with the model's pose and the pants pulled up high like that, the crotch looks really, really huge as well, making this big, green piece of cloth smash you straight in the face... Had the pants been in the same style (or at least colors) as the blouse, or had they been plain black, I think it would've worked far better in the end result.
Now, I didn't want to write this as a critique, since you've posted two photos at once, of which I really like the left one and really don't like the right one, to be honest. So that would be kinda hard to write a critique on. Had you split them into two deviations, I'd gladly give critique on both
It's a common thing in fashion to post the photos in pairs, a close up and a general. this is fashion, this is what the outfit is so this is what your critique is on. My photography skills do not change because you don't like the styling.
Now, I didn't want to write this as a critique, since you've posted two photos at once, of which I really like the left one and really don't like the right one, to be honest. So that would be kinda hard to write a critique on. Had you split them into two deviations, I'd gladly give critique on both
My photography skills do not change because you don't like the styling.